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Post by Cuki on Apr 7, 2010 13:28:29 GMT -5
This thread is kinda my intent to create a thread where we exchange criticism and advice of RP. Hopefully it will help improve the concepts, boost their awesomeness, and help them become reality.
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Post by Cuki on Apr 7, 2010 13:57:16 GMT -5
I will make the first post. I have been idly working on some Temple stuff and was hoping for some more outside input. The first part of which is a general outline of Aramoth's core beliefs. -Battle is honorable. -Combat is between warriors. -The greatest strength is within one's own body. -Action is better than reflection. -Justice is in the hands of the strong. -A true warrior uses their strength to protect their people. -The honorable Path of War gives divine strength to those in battle. -True worship of Aramoth is in brave action and martial skill. -The Bloody Aspect is a glory for those it comes upon. Take honor in the divine bloodlust. Any suggestions on additions and/or alterations? The general outline of the thing I want to create (A full fleshing out of the Temple of Aramoth, including a canon that creates a history of why these are beliefs.) on the wiki would be something like this: 1- Epic speech about the awesomeness of Aramoth. 2- Core beliefs. 3- Hierarchy and layout of the Temple. 4- The canon. (Voice of the Soldier.) 1-First Faithful (Dragons) 2-Creation of the Naga 3-Fall of the Ha-Naga 4-Frost Giant on the Mountian (A Frost Giant clan comes to worship Aramoth after seening the heroics of a single hermit.) 5-Rise of the Young (A story of the rise of a Human tribe that has come to worship Aramoth with their allies, another tribe consisting of Felines.) 6-Lone Fighter (The strength of a individual warrior against a large number) 7-Spared Child (A single son is spared from a massacare. Grows up to systematically kill his family's murders, save for the person that spared his life.) 8-Pre Emptive Strike 9-Fate of a Coward (A warrior flees from battle and lives to suffer to see his family and clanmates killed and everything he knew in life taken way.) 10-Iron Statue (An apprientice monk is given a statue that becomes a man. He must defeat it. Defeats it through clever tatics rather than brute force.) 11-The Loved Tyrant 12-Strength of the Bear (Tell of the test all monk's must take before receiving advanced training and the favor of Aramoth.) 5-List of PCs involved with the Temple. 6-List of NPCs involved with the Temple.
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